Forgive my digression
I need an outlet of expression
All of this energy its killing me
It needs to be directed
Too much time spent introspected
Now it needs to be reflected
So I create a mirror with my words
Organizing thoughts into herds
Through the many twists and curves
I try to create coherent meaning
Conducting a sort of mental screening
Looking for what lies in between
Those ideas that were not at the forefront of my mind.
In due time they become a poem, a story, a song
Something my heart knew all along
Something my mind can barely grasp
A fleeting thought that will pass
I need to catch it while it lasts.
Energy transformed
Through the mental storm
As I was once forewarned
Creativity can’t be ignored.
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I have to write a paper for school and I'm procrastinating in a productive way. I feel better that I wrote something though maybe now I can write my paper easier!!
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I think you're a lot better at this than you realise. Your syntax is excellent, you can keep the flow, the meter, the rhythm.
Maybe try something that has no structured rhyme scheme one time? I think by trying to funnel your creativity into ordered structure you're compromising expression a tiny bit. See what happens.
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So I'll fall in love with music and make love to art, though they've no arms to hold me they know my heart <3
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So I'll fall in love with music and make love to art, though they've no arms to hold me they know my heart <3
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So I'll fall in love with music and make love to art, though they've no arms to hold me they know my heart <3
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Looking for what lies [inbetween and]
Those ideas that were not at the forefront of my mind.
did you mean not to have a space between "in & between"
and secondly, the "and" at the end of the sentence seems unnecesary.
If I'm wrong could you explain your choices
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Mow da zeebas down
like sheep.
Give dem to me
nice and dead.
Me no happy
‘til me fed.”
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So I'll fall in love with music and make love to art, though they've no arms to hold me they know my heart <3
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