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Sympathy vs. Empathy by ~Renee85:iconRenee85:



Candlewick fingernails and candle wax fingertips
A pack of matches, handle of Gin
The absence of faith in favor of sin.
Porcelain skin and candy-flavored lips.

Unraveled like yarn in the cat’s den
In the arms of liquid silver strangers
Is it so much stranger?

Mistaking compassion for being tragically flawed,
But tis better to feel something…
Than to feel nothing at all.
©2009 ~Renee85
:iconrenee85:

Author's Comments

sometimes there's not much distinction from one person's problems to the next...

like we're a bunch of congruent triangles... different sizes but the same underlying structure.

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Candlewick fingernails and candle wax fingertips
A pack of matches, handle of Gin
The absence of faith in favor of sin.
Porcelain skin and candy-flavored lips.


Highly sensual. Nicely erotic. Good scribe ;)

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"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
:iconrenee85:
Thanks! I was perusing through your poems and I really enjoyed them so I added you to my watch so that I can go through them some more. Expect some favorites soon hahah :-)

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So I'll fall in love with music and make love to art, though they've no arms to hold me they know my heart <3
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:)

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"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
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"liquid silver strangers"

You certainly have the muses working in a basement sweatshop ;)

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The evolved ape has spoken.
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hahahaha no way i give my muses first class treatment whenever they come these days!! which isn't as often as it used to be...

Thanks for the favorites!!

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So I'll fall in love with music and make love to art, though they've no arms to hold me they know my heart <3

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